Prompt: Describe a place as you explore it for the first time.
Recommendation:
To further develop descriptive techniques, the writer could study Pilgrim at Tinker Creek by Annie Dillard. Dillard’s ability to weave intricate observations with profound reflection would provide valuable insights into creating vivid and thought-provoking landscapes.
Mark awarded for content and structure = 16/16
Mark awarded for style and accuracy = 24/24
Total marks awarded = 40/40