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Describe the sun rising over a special place.

Prompt: Describe the sun rising over a special place.

Essay:

The first shard of light pierced the horizon, scattering the mist that clung stubbornly to the valley. A golden glow swept over the ancient temple perched on the hill, revealing its weathered stone walls etched with the stories of a forgotten age. The air, cool and crisp, carried the faint scent of dew-kissed grass mingled with the earthiness of moss-covered rocks. Birds stirred in the canopy above, their tentative chirps forming a symphony of awakening.

Recommendation:
The writer could study The Secret Garden by Frances Hodgson Burnett to enhance their ability to intertwine mystery with the beauty of nature. Burnett’s descriptions create immersive, transformative spaces, which could inspire even more profound emotional resonance in future work.

Mark awarded for content and structure = 16/16
Mark awarded for style and accuracy = 23/24
Total marks awarded = 39/40