Prompt: Write a story which involves a misunderstanding.
Essay:
“Put the bag down, now!” the officer shouted, his voice cutting through the chaos of the train station. Nia froze, her trembling fingers clutching the strap of her backpack. Around her, a crowd of commuters stared, their faces a mix of fear and curiosity.
Recommendation:
To further enhance suspense and character development, studying The Girl on the Train by Paula Hawkins could be useful. Hawkins masterfully builds tension and explores misunderstandings, with vivid character insights and gripping pacing. By analyzing her techniques, the writer can refine their ability to weave suspense and develop multidimensional characters.
Mark awarded for content and structure = 16/16
Mark awarded for style and accuracy = 23/24
Total marks awarded = 39/40