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Write a story with the title, ‘The transformation’.

Prompt: Write a story with the title, ‘The transformation’.

Essay:

The mirror shattered with a deafening crash. Emma stumbled back, her breath ragged, staring at the fragments scattered across the floor. Each shard reflected a distorted version of her face, twisted and unfamiliar. Her hands trembled as she reached for the edges of the sink, gripping it for support.

Recommendation:
To refine suspense and character development, the writer could study Frankenstein by Mary Shelley. Shelley’s portrayal of transformation, both physical and emotional, and her exploration of human resilience would provide valuable insights into crafting complex, compelling narratives.

Mark awarded for content and structure = 16/16
Mark awarded for style and accuracy = 24/24
Total marks awarded = 40/40