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IGCSE English Narrative Composition Sample Essays

IGCSE 0500 First Language English – Narrative Composition: Two Sample Essays

Victor Tan
 

One of the most crucial aspects of any student’s journey is learning how to write well and to understand the criteria for the mark scheme… But how do you make sure that your understanding of the criteria and the mark scheme actually reflects that of an examiner?

This makes it such that it is very important to have good examples…

…And that’s exactly what this essay aims to resolve today!

Here’s a set of two sample essays for Narrative Writing for the IGCSE. Each essay is written to match a specific level descriptor and has been validated with the experience of our team, and reflects the way that we would assign marks based on the mark scheme.

Have a look at this, think about it, and hopefully it will help you to understand what is required and desirable in the exam 🙂

We’ll start with two essays from the Winter 2022 Paper 2; more examples will come soon (and even more for our paid members!), and we will soon publish a book of narrative writing AND descriptive writing essays as well; it will be available on both Shopee and Lazada as well as from this site, so make sure that you’re following this blog!

Without further ado, here are the examples!

Example A: 

Title: “Write a story with the title ‘Lost’.” – Winter 2022, Paper 2 Variant 2.

Tom, a 12-year-old boy, lived in a small town surrounded by a vast, mysterious forest. He spent most of his weekends exploring the woods with his loyal dog, Max. They had many exciting adventures, discovering hidden trails, secret clearings, and beautiful wildlife. Tom felt a sense of freedom and wonder every time he ventured into the woods.

One sunny Saturday morning, Tom and Max set out on another adventure. They walked deeper into the forest than they had ever gone before, captivated by the vibrant colours and enchanting sounds of nature. Hours passed, and they were blissfully unaware of how far they had strayed from home.

As the sun began to set, Tom realized they were in an unfamiliar part of the woods. He tried to retrace their steps, but the shadows cast by the towering trees made it difficult to navigate. Panic began to set in as they wandered aimlessly, desperately searching for a familiar landmark.

The sun dipped below the horizon, and the forest was soon enveloped in darkness. Tom’s fear escalated, and Max, sensing his distress, stayed close by his side. As they stumbled through the darkness, they suddenly spotted a flickering light in the distance.

Approaching the light, they discovered a small, old cabin with a warm glow emanating from its windows. Tom hesitated, but he knew they needed help. He mustered the courage to knock on the door.

An elderly man with a kind face and a long, white beard opened the door. Tom nervously explained their predicament, and the man agreed to help them find their way home. He grabbed a flashlight and a map, and together, they set off into the night.

They walked for hours, following the map and the man’s vast knowledge of the forest. The journey was long, and Tom’s exhaustion began to take over. But, just as hope seemed to be fading, they reached the familiar edge of the woods. Tom’s house came into view, and relief washed over him.

Tom thanked the old man, who offered some wise advice before departing. “Remember, young one, the forest can be both magical and dangerous. Always be prepared and respect its power.”


Comment: “The essay “Lost” deserves a level 4 in both Table A: Content and Structure and Table B: Style and Accuracy. The story’s plot is relevant and cohesive, featuring narrative elements such as character development and setting the scene. The content is relevant, with some development (W1), and the structure is competently managed (W2). The story falls short of level 5 as the plot could be more strongly developed with further description, character interaction, or a more effective climax.

For Table B, the essay displays some precise vocabulary and a range of sentence structures used occasionally for effect (W3). The story maintains an appropriate register for the context (W4), and the spelling, punctuation, and grammar are generally accurate, with some errors (W5). It does not reach level 5 due to the vocabulary and sentence structures not being consistently precise or well-chosen for effect.

The essay does not deserve a level 6 because the content is not complex, engaging, or effective enough (W1), and the structure is not as well-balanced or carefully managed for deliberate effect (W2). Furthermore, the vocabulary is not consistently well-chosen for effect (W3), and the spelling, punctuation, and grammar are not almost always accurate (W5).

Lastly, the essay does not deserve a level lower than 4 because it does not exhibit the characteristics of lower levels, such as limited or unclear content (W1), partially organized or ineffective structure (W2), simple vocabulary or sentence structures (W3), or persistent grammatical errors (W5).

Now, on the other hand… What does a Level 6 essay look like?

Have a look!

Title: “Write a story with the title ‘Lost’.” – Winter 2022, Paper 2 Variant 2.

In the quaint town of Willowbrook, nestled in the heart of the valley, nine-year-old Lucy found solace in the dense, enchanting woods that surrounded her home. The forest was her sanctuary, a place where she could let her imagination run wild. Alongside her trusty companion, a golden retriever named Jasper, she would spend countless hours exploring its depths, discovering its secrets.

One day, as the sun dipped below the horizon, Lucy and Jasper ventured further into the woods than they ever had before. They traversed moss-covered trails, played hide-and-seek among the towering trees, and splashed in the crystal-clear stream. As they roamed deeper into the woods, the sun’s fading light cast long shadows across their path, but they continued on, oblivious to the encroaching darkness.

It wasn’t until the last rays of sunlight vanished that Lucy realized they were lost. Panic surged through her veins as she clung to Jasper for comfort, whispering, “We’ll find our way back, won’t we?” The woods had transformed into an eerie, unfamiliar world. Shadows danced in the moonlight, and the once melodic bird songs were replaced by unfamiliar, haunting sounds. Together, they stumbled through the dark, moonlit forest, guided only by instinct and the faint glimmer of hope.

As they pressed on, the forest seemed to close in around them, the darkness growing thicker with each step. Suddenly, they came upon a mysterious, ancient oak tree. It stood tall and majestic, its gnarled roots digging deep into the earth, as though it had been there for centuries. The tree seemed to beckon them, and as they approached, they noticed a glowing inscription carved into the trunk. It read, “Whisper your fears, and I shall show the way.”

With trepidation, Lucy leaned in and whispered her fears to the tree, her breath quivering. As she finished, the inscription shimmered, and a trail of luminous fireflies emerged from the tree, leading them through the darkness. As they followed the swarm, the menacing shadows receded, and the forest gradually regained its familiar allure. The fireflies weaved through the trees, illuminating their path and casting a warm, comforting glow.

The journey through the forest felt like an eternity, but eventually, the fireflies led them to the edge of the woods, where they caught a glimpse of their town’s warm glow. Overwhelmed with relief, Lucy hugged Jasper tightly, tears streaming down her cheeks. Together, they raced towards the town, grateful for the guidance that had delivered them from the clutches of the unknown.

Upon their return, Lucy shared the tale of their adventure with her family, who listened in awe. The ancient oak tree and its magical fireflies became a cherished part of local folklore, a symbol of hope for those who found themselves lost, both literally and metaphorically. And for Lucy, the woods remained her sanctuary, but she never ventured too far from the guiding light of home.

Comment:

The essay “Lost” deserves the highest possible grade, as it demonstrates complex, engaging, and effective content (W1) with a secure, well-balanced, and carefully managed structure for effect (W2). The story plot contains well-defined and developed ideas as well as images to create a convincing overall picture with varieties of focus. As for writing for effect, it contains a good range of sentence structures and precise vocabulary, used effectively for effect (W3), while maintaining a consistent, well-chosen register suitable for the context (W4). Spelling, punctuation, and grammar are almost always accurate (W5).

To improve the story, the writer can incorporate more sensory details to further immerse the reader in the setting. By adding these elements, the essay is able to evoke even more vivid images and emotions, further enhancing the reader’s experience and appreciation.

Okay, and we’re done! 🙂

I hope that you enjoyed this post, and that you will find it valuable!

If you did, do feel free to share it with your friends! We will proceed onwards with descriptive writing examples pretty soon – these will be part of the membership site component of the site materials, and we will also create more of these materials for you soon!

Thank you once again, and we look forward to sharing more with you soon!

V.

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How to Master Vocabulary and Grammar in Record Time for the IGCSE

Victor Tan
 

Ah, the joys of being an IGCSE English 0500 First Language student!

You’re not only expected to demonstrate an understanding of both explicit and implicit meanings in texts (AO1 Reading), but also articulate your thoughts and ideas with the finesse of a wordsmith (AO2 Writing).

You might think to yourself that you are beyond grammar and vocabulary…

But no, you very much are not.

These are the foundation of being able to think well and understand well and therefore read and write well – the foundations don’t disappear just because they’re not the immediate focus of class, although since in many classes teachers no longer focus on them, it’s very easy to forget them.

But that’s not a good idea.

It’s not a good idea precisely because grammar and vocabulary are what allow you to process things as you see them in those unseen texts and understand them in context, piece them together, and ultimately end up writing something that’s valuable to the audience – they don’t lose their importance just because classes now focus on different text types.

Fear not, dear students, for we are here to help you master vocabulary and grammar in record time, so you can confidently tackle higher-level thinking and ace those assessment objectives like a boss.

  1. Set goals that make you want to pull an all-nighter (but please don’t)

You’ve got your assessment objectives (AO1 and AO2) laid out, and now it’s time to set some specific, achievable goals for mastering vocabulary and grammar. Break them down into smaller tasks and track your progress. You’ll be surprised how motivated you’ll be when you see how far you’ve come.

  1. Read like there’s no tomorrow (or Netflix)

To build vocabulary and improve grammar, read a wide range of texts – books, articles, essays, cereal boxes, you name it. Take note of unfamiliar words and phrases, guess their meaning from the context, and then look them up to confirm. Bonus points if you can use them in a conversation later that day.

  1. Flashcards: your new BFF

Create flashcards with new vocabulary words and grammar rules, and review them regularly using a spaced repetition system like Anki or Quizlet. This will help you commit them to memory faster than you can say “onomatopoeia.”

  1. Active learning is the new black

Ditch the passive approach and dive into activities that require you to actively use English. Join online forums, start a blog, or engage in debates with friends. Your brain will thank you for the workout.

  1. Grammar: learn it, love it, live it

Instead of memorizing grammar rules in isolation, learn them in context by analyzing examples from real texts. Then practice creating your own sentences using those structures. Trust us, you’ll start seeing grammar patterns everywhere, even in your dreams (which may or may not be a good thing).

  1. Practice makes perfect (or at least a lot better)

Consistent practice is key to mastering vocabulary and grammar. Dedicate time each day to reviewing and practicing what you’ve learned. Before you know it, you’ll be a walking, talking English 0500 First Language dictionary.

  1. Online resources: your secret weapon

We live in the digital age, so take advantage of the countless online resources available to help you improve your vocabulary and grammar. Websites like BBC Learning English and Cambridge Dictionary offer free lessons, quizzes, and exercises. It’s like having a tutor at your fingertips 24/7.

  1. Feedback: embrace it, learn from it, grow

Don’t be afraid to ask for feedback on your writing and speaking from teachers, classmates, or native speakers. Constructive criticism is the ultimate growth fuel. Just remember, even the best writers and speakers didn’t start out that way.

Conclusion

Improving your English grammar and vocabulary is crucial for success in the IGCSE English 0500 First Language course. By setting goals, actively engaging with the language, and practicing consistently, you’ll be more than ready to tackle the challenges associated with higher-level thinking.

So, let’s step up, buckle down, and show IGCSE English 0500 who’s boss!

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IGCSE English 0500 Assessment Objectives, Part 2: A02 Writing

Victor Tan
 

In this post, we’ll continue the discussion of the Reading and Writing Assessment Objectives on the International General Certificate of Secondary Education (IGCSE) English 0500 examination that we began in the previous post, in which we talked about A01 Reading.

In this post, we will specifically go over A02: Writing for your understanding, and cover the criteria in detail.

If you are a parent, feel free to share this with your children – if you are a student, read it so you understand what you are being assessed on.

Even better? Read it together and share it with your friends.

Here is the assessment objective, and its associated dependencies.

AO2 Writing
Candidates will be assessed on their ability to:
W1 Articulate experience and express what is thought, felt and imagined
W2 Organise and structure ideas and opinions for deliberate effect
W3 Use a range of vocabulary and sentence structures appropriate to context
W4 Use register appropriate to context
W5 Make accurate use of spelling, punctuation and grammar.

If you’d like to go over the full criteria and syllabus, have a look here (2024-2026 syllabus).

For a more clear breakdown… Read on!

The IGCSE Writing assessment objectives focus on skills that enable students to express themselves effectively in written communication. These skills include articulating experiences and thoughts, organising and structuring ideas for deliberate effect, using appropriate vocabulary and sentence structures, using register appropriate to context, and making accurate use of spelling, punctuation, and grammar.

These skills are *essentially essential* for success in academic and professional contexts, where effective communication is a critical aspect of success and you only have one chance to write good essays and will have no right to reply when you are writing an exam, and the examiner reads your essay.

Specifically, your writing needs to make sense to anyone who is reading it whether they are a child, adult, CEO, teacher, it needs to be in line with each prompt that has been given to you, and it needs to be good.

Sounds tough?

Don’t worry, it’s not as hard as you think – Let’s break it down!

AO2 Writing:

You will be assessed on your ability to:

W1 Articulate experience and express what is thought, felt and imagined

Explanation: This criterion assesses your ability to communicate your experiences, thoughts, feelings, and imagination through writing. To demonstrate this skill, you can follow these steps:

  • Plan your writing by thinking about what you want to communicate and how you will structure your ideas.
  • Use descriptive language and sensory details to bring your experiences and imagination to life.
  • Express your thoughts and feelings clearly and accurately, making sure to use appropriate language and tone for your audience.

W2 Organise and structure ideas and opinions for deliberate effect

Explanation: This criterion assesses your ability to organise and structure your ideas and opinions in a way that has a deliberate effect on the reader. To demonstrate this skill, you can follow these steps:

  • Plan your writing by thinking about the purpose of your writing and the main ideas that you want to convey.
  • Use paragraphs to structure your ideas and opinions in a logical and coherent way.
  • Use connective words and phrases to link your ideas together and guide the reader through your writing.
  • Consider the effect that you want to have on the reader and use language and structure to achieve this.

W3 Use a range of vocabulary and sentence structures appropriate to context

Explanation: This criterion assesses your ability to use a range of vocabulary and sentence structures that are appropriate for the context of your writing. To demonstrate this skill, you can follow these steps:

  • Consider the audience and purpose of your writing and choose vocabulary that is appropriate for them.
  • Use a variety of sentence structures, including simple, compound, and complex sentences, to add variety and interest to your writing.
  • Use precise and descriptive vocabulary to convey your ideas clearly and accurately.

W4 Use register appropriate to context

Explanation: This criterion assesses your ability to use a register that is appropriate for the context of your writing. Register refers to the level of formality or informality that is appropriate for the situation. To demonstrate this skill, you can follow these steps:

  • Consider the audience and purpose of your writing and choose a register that is appropriate for them.
  • Use formal language and structure for academic or professional writing, and informal language and structure for personal or creative writing.
  • Use appropriate greetings and sign-offs for emails and letters, and avoid using slang or inappropriate language.

W5 Make accurate use of spelling, punctuation and grammar.

Explanation: This criterion assesses your ability to use correct spelling, punctuation, and grammar in your writing. To demonstrate this skill, you can follow these steps:

  • Proofread your writing carefully to ensure that there are no spelling errors.
  • Use appropriate punctuation to clarify meaning and convey tone.
  • Use correct grammar to ensure that your writing is clear and easy to understand.
  • Use punctuation correctly to separate and organise ideas in your writing.
  • Use capital letters appropriately for proper nouns, the start of sentences, and headings.
  • Use correct verb tenses to convey meaning accurately.
  • Use subject-verb agreement to ensure that your writing is grammatically correct.
  • Use pronouns correctly and ensure they agree in gender and number with the nouns they refer to.
  • Use conjunctions and prepositions correctly to link ideas together and show relationships between them.

Overall, writing questions in the IGCSE exam require you to effectively communicate your experiences, thoughts, feelings, and ideas through writing. You need to demonstrate a mastery of vocabulary, grammar, punctuation, and register appropriate to the context of your writing, and organise and structure your ideas in a way that has a deliberate effect on the reader.

This isn’t always easy.

It takes a lifetime of dedication to learn how to write, and this applies not just to people who have just started to prepare for an examination that they are viewing with a sense of impending doom, but also often to students that have been reading as a hobby and as a habit for the longest of times.

We’ll cover how to excel in different aspects of writing in later posts, and you can read the accompanying blog post to this one about A01 Reading here – in the meantime, if you need tutoring and guidance to ensure that you can perform to the very best of your abilities, do feel free to drop a line!

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