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New Collaboration!

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Hi everyone! This is decidedly not English-related, but tomorrow I will be embarking on a new collaboration with a Teacher Herman, a current Malaysian student from Harvard university.

Herman is a rising sophomore at Harvard University studying Integrative Biology, and one of the 6 Malaysian students who were admitted to Harvard’s Class of 2026. Hailing from the vibrant city of Penang, Herman brings a genuine passion for learning and will surely be a wonderful mentor on your learning journey!


Having excelled in his studies, Herman achieved outstanding results in both his A-level examinations at KYUEM, securing 4A* in Biology, Chemistry, Physics, and Mathematics, as well as in SPM where he obtained 10A+.


When he’s not buried in textbooks, you’ll find him exploring different realms of knowledge. Despite having enjoyed chess for years, he abhors memorizing an endless list of chess openings and his distaste of rote memorization drives him to focus on conceptual understanding. He finds solace in the pages of thought-provoking books, where new ideas and perspectives fuel his curiosity and inspire him to learn more.


To join our trial class, drop me a WhatsApp here: https://wa.link/o1om7y

Thank you!

V.

Free IGCSE First Language English 2021 Sample Essays! (Narrative Composition)

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Hello everyone! I’ve been in Singapore this week meeting up with Mensa Singapore and also attending Singapore’s most prominent technology event, ATxSingapore.

With Cerventus and Johann from Malaysia
With Mensa Singapore (we went to Korea together!)

It’s been a wonderful time of learning and experiencing, and needless to say, it’s been a busy time, but this week, it’s also been a pleasure to welcome a few of you into the group class that I’ve been conducting; I’ll speak more about that later, and look forward to welcoming more of you soon!

Anyway, here are two free narrative essays for you today, reflecting as always a deep emphasis on what is needed for you to succeed according to Cambridge’s criteria for excellence, which I hope you’ll find is very much aligned with the process of creating an engaging and entertaining story and which I hope you’ll remember to look at as you practice.

The first essay is provided on a free access basis to every single one of you, and to read the second one, you’ll need to have a free or premium site membership; do sign up, and enjoy the benefits!

Premium membership provides you with full access to essay samples published on the site. To sign up for premium, click here!

If you’d like to purchase our extremely well-reviewed book of essay samples (encompassing 2021 and 2022 narrative and descriptive essays), feel free to pick up your copy here 🙂

Meanwhile, enjoy the essays!

Prompt: Write a story which involves a mistake in the sending or receiving of a message.

Essay:

Amidst the cacophony of the bustling train station, Clara clutched her telegram with a fervor that turned her knuckles white. Time slipped like sand through fingers as the weight of the ink-laden paper bore into her soul. An unforeseen error in the telegram she sent to her brother, Anthony, during the Great War had summoned him to this very platform, moments away from embarking on his final mission.

Fleetingly, Clara recalled the hours spent crafting her message, each word imbued with love, comfort, and hope. A rogue tear traced its way down her pale cheek as she pondered the cruel twist of fate that a typographical mistake could wield such a devastating consequence.

Through the throngs of soot-stained travelers, a familiar silhouette took form. An ethereal beam of light seemed to crown Anthony’s war-weary head as they locked eyes. Embracing, the world around them momentarily faded into oblivion. His coarse uniform stood in stark contrast to the warmth of his presence.

“I’m here,” he whispered. “Your message, it brought me back.”

Clara’s heart throbbed painfully against her ribcage, each beat a plea for time to halt. The shrill whistle of the departing train gnawed at the air, and as they parted, she pressed a small envelope into his hand. “My heart goes with you,” she murmured.

Months later, a letter arrived, clad in military regalia. Her hands shook as she read the words of her brother’s comrade: “He spoke of you every night, and your letters were his sanctuary.”

As she clutched the envelope Anthony never opened, Clara realized the profundity of her unintended message. It had summoned him back to the tender embrace of love, if only for a fleeting moment.

Days turned to weeks and weeks to months, as Clara felt a part of her soul cleaved with her brother’s absence. In her room, the air heavy with dust and memories, she penned letters, one after the other, like laying bricks in the walls of a house she would never live in. They remained sealed, addresses blank; these were letters she could never send.

In the tapestry of her heart, each thread was woven with echoes of their last goodbye, and how an error, a mere butterfly, had sent ripples through their lives.

As the first snow of winter settled upon the graves of the soldiers, Clara stood before Anthony’s grave. She finally felt that the weight she had been carrying for months had lessened, as if the snow was taking some of it upon itself.

In her hand was the last letter she would ever write to him. She buried it there, with him, and whispered to the wind, “Wherever you are, find peace, for in your heart, I found mine.”

Comment:

The content (W1) is engaging and has depth, portraying the emotional journey of Clara. The additional details such as “letters she could never send” add layers to her character.

The structure (W2) is secure and well-balanced, with the addition of Clara’s life after receiving the military letter and her final act, providing a complete arc.

Precise vocabulary (W3) is used, such as “the tapestry of her heart”, evoking imagery. The register (W4) is consistent with a historical and emotional tone. Spelling, punctuation, and grammar are accurate (W5).

To improve, the essay could delve into the moment of the error to enhance suspense. The phrase “the air heavy with dust and memories” could have included more sensory details.

A book such as “All the Light We Cannot See” by Anthony Doerr could be an invaluable resource for the writer. The novel’s use of intricate imagery, rich character development, and its ability to weave emotions through the tapestry of war could be especially beneficial. Emulating Doerr’s writing, the writer can further imbue the narrative with textured descriptions that breathe life into each scene.

Mark awarded for content and structure = 15/16
Mark awarded for style and accuracy = 23/24
Total marks awarded = 38/40

Unconventional Yet Effective Strategies for Mastering English: A Beginner’s Guide

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Introduction

English, the global lingua franca, opens doors to numerous opportunities. Learning it, however, can be a challenge for many. You’ve probably heard the usual advice: read more books, watch more movies, practice speaking, and so on.

At the end of the day though, we must end up dealing with human nature and the natural inertia that keeps us from moving in the direction of change: Somehow or another, we need strategies to help us learn English automatically, and in ways that naturally allow us to progress.

With that said, here are some unconventional yet effective ways to learn English that can make this process easier, more fun, and highly productive!

1. Embrace the World of Television

We tend to give television a bad rap, but while it’s true that too much TV can be harmful, TV shows or Netflix alike can be an incredibly valuable tool for learning English. Whether you’re watching English language TV shows or shows in your first language with English subtitles, this method offers a host of benefits.

English Language TV Shows

Watching English language TV shows exposes you to native speakers using the language naturally. This gives you the opportunity to hear a variety of accents, colloquial expressions, idioms, and cultural references that textbooks often miss. Additionally, it’s an engaging way to improve your listening comprehension skills.

How to do it:

  • Start with shows that match your English proficiency level. For beginners, children’s shows can be a great start as they use simple language and repeat phrases.
  • Listen actively. This is very important; if you just watch TV, you won’t get the result that you seek. Pay attention to how words are pronounced, and how sentences are constructed.
  • Pause and repeat. If a phrase or sentence strikes you, pause, repeat it, and try to understand its meaning and context.

Shows in Your First Language with English Subtitles

If you’re not ready to dive into English language shows, watching shows in your native language with English subtitles can be a helpful stepping stone. This method allows you to associate English words and phrases with dialogue you already understand.

How to do it:

  • Choose a familiar show in your first language and turn on the English subtitles.
  • Actively read the subtitles while listening to the dialogue.
  • Pay attention to how words and phrases in English correspond to your first language.

The idea behind this technique is to allow you to very quickly and directly match and understanding of the context of a TV show that you enjoy with your mastery of the language, or to associate your mastery of your first language with English, thereby allowing you to improve dramatically as you engage in something that you enjoy and that both has storyline and lore that you can follow along with even if you don’t understand specific parts, which means that you can reference things like IMDB in order to cross check your understanding of the events that occurred within the show, which will naturally allow you to calibrate your interpretations and your understanding.

It’s important to note that while subtitles can be a useful learning tool, they aren’t always a perfect translation of the spoken dialogue. However, they can be a great way to start familiarizing yourself with English vocabulary and sentence structure.

In both cases, the key is active engagement. Don’t just watch passively – make it an interactive learning experience. This method not only improves your English skills but also makes learning enjoyable and less strenuous.

As with any other learning method, consistency is essential, so make it a part of your regular routine. So, grab some popcorn and start learning!

2. Shadowing Technique

Shadowing is an active listening and speaking exercise that involves mimicking the speech of English speakers. This method, first introduced by polyglot Alexander Arguelles, is not just repeating after a speaker but doing so simultaneously as they speak.

How to do it:

  • Choose an audio clip from a native English speaker. Podcasts, TED Talks, or audiobooks are great options; The only catch is that it has to be something that you are interested in – it could be a talk about psychology, artificial intelligence, or even a commentary on your favourite Korean drama.
  • Listen once to get the gist of the conversation.
  • Get the transcript of the video, podcast, or conversation if you can.
  • On the second round, start repeating the speaker’s words as they’re saying them. Don’t pause the audio; keep the flow.
  • Try to match the speaker’s pronunciation, intonation, and rhythm.

The idea behind this technique is to mimic the speech of another person, and although you won’t have the chance to copy them in every instance when you’re not watching videos like these, successfully making another person’s speech increases the probability that you will learn speech patterns that allow you to communicate in ways that you think are suitable or desirable.


3. Harness the Power of Artificial Intelligence

Artificial Intelligence (AI) is revolutionizing many aspects of our lives, and language learning is no exception. Leveraging AI can provide a personalized, immersive, and interactive approach to supplement your English language learning journey.

Language Learning Apps

Many language learning apps now use AI to provide personalized learning experiences. These apps adapt to your learning pace and style, focusing on areas where you need improvement. Apps like Duolingo, Babbel, and Rosetta Stone use AI to offer personalized lessons, instant feedback, and interactive exercises.

How to do it:

  • Choose a language learning app that uses AI.
  • Spend some time daily on the app. Regular practice is key to making progress.
  • Take advantage of the personalized feedback to improve your weak areas.

AI Chatbots

AI chatbots can simulate conversation with a native English speaker, providing an opportunity for practice anytime, anywhere. The chatbot evaluates your responses and provides instant feedback, allowing you to learn from your mistakes in real-time.

How to do it:

  • Find a language learning platform that offers an AI chatbot. ChatGPT is a great (and free!) choice.
  • Engage in conversation with the chatbot regularly, and seek feedback from it.
  • Review the feedback and corrections from the chatbot to improve your language skills.

AI-Powered Voice Assistants

Voice assistants like Siri, Alexa, or Google Assistant can help improve your English pronunciation and listening skills. They can answer questions, engage in conversation, and even play language learning games.

Additionally, they offer you the chance not only to improve your English language mastery, but also to improve your efficiency and productivity, thereby allowing you to link your language learning effort to your efforts to save time, which allows you to dedicate more time towards improving your English proficiency without sacrificing other things.

Furthermore, using voice assistants and becoming extremely comfortable with using them in public gives you more experience with utilising the English language in public contexts and also helps you to dramatically improve the fluency and articulation of your speech in order to serve the purpose of facilitating clear instructions to your algorithm of choice.

How to do it:

  • Set your voice assistant on your phone (Alexa, Siri, Google Voice Assistant) to English.
  • Practice giving commands, asking questions, and having simple conversations with the assistant.
  • Begin to use voice assistants in order to streamline your workflow and otherwise perform tasks that would normally take longer to accomplish such as typing or writing, by writing emails in English through dictation, or otherwise.

AI Language Translation Tools

Tools like Google Translate use AI to provide translations between languages. While it shouldn’t be relied on for perfect translations, it can be a helpful tool for understanding the general meaning of a text or for looking up individual words.

How to do it:

  • Use translation tools to understand new English phrases or words.
  • Try translating your own sentences into English to see if they make sense.
  • Type in English in software like Grammarly – this will showcase to you immediately where it is that you have problems with your sentence construction and writing by highlighting problems in your writing and offering simple corrections.

Incorporating AI into your language learning routine can provide a valuable supplement to traditional learning methods. It offers flexibility, personalization, and immediate feedback, making your English language learning journey more efficient and engaging.

However, remember that AI tools are just that – tools. They are most effective when used in conjunction with other methods, such as classroom instruction, language immersion, and real-world practice.

4. The Island Technique

Invented by English teacher AJ Hoge, the Island Technique involves creating a ‘safe space’ for English conversation where learners feel comfortable making mistakes and practicing English freely.

How to do it:

  • Choose a place in your home where you will only speak or think in English. Some fun and interesting ideas include using masking tape in order to cordon off a specific zone of your house, or make the choice to only speak in English while you are sitting in a particular chair or table, or while you are in a particular room. This place will be your ‘island’.
  • You may also choose a particular time of the day to serve as that “island“.
  • Engage in English activities in this ‘island’. You could read a book, watch a movie, write a journal entry, or even think aloud.
  • The key is to create a mental association between that place or time and English, making it a routine part of your day.

The only way to get better at English is to practice it, and this technique helps to break down the barrier between yourself and your practice time by creating a psychological association that is easy for you to act upon – by creating this environment for yourself, you are increasing the potential number of practice opportunities that you will have dramatically increasing the number of chances that in order to practice the English language daily.

This is one of my favorite techniques! It involves not only a transformation of study strategy, but also the creation of an environment for habit formation.

By integrating this not only into your own personal life, but also a part of your family routine, we can begin to create a culture within your household that can naturally improve the chances that the people around you will begin to speak in English and you will have opportunities to improve together as a household! 🙂

Conclusion

Mastering English doesn’t have to be a tedious process.

With these unconventional strategies, you can turn learning into an enjoyable and rewarding experience. Remember, the key to success is consistency. Pick a strategy that resonates withyou and stick with it. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes – they are an integral part of the learning process.

With patience, persistence, and the right approach, you’ll see significant improvements in your English skills. Happy learning!